Diamante Poem by Huzaifa

 

Huzaifa

Chivalrous, Resilient

Striving, Thriving, Maneuvering

Brighter than bright I will shine

Ending, Surrendering, Abandoning

Boorish, Frail

Thanatos



Comments

  1. M HamzaNovember 17, 2020 at 12:18 PM

    MashAllah brother. Just as you say, you shine so brightly that a mere poem can not possibly describe you, but then again how can a poem written by you fail? Such is the paradoxical nature of your existence, a breathing contradiction. I can do nothing but be amazed. XD

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  2. Malik Zain Ali SajidNovember 18, 2020 at 12:36 AM

    Considerable effort done, Amazing poem !

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  3. Muhammad Sharjeel FarzadNovember 18, 2020 at 12:39 AM

    This poem has a nice structure . Its writer possesses a very beautiful imaginative power .

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  4. AnonymousNovember 18, 2020 at 4:31 AM

    Just by reading the poem you can tell that the writer is a man of true talent. Nice vocab. Great poem indeed.

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  5. Huzaifa ZainNovember 18, 2020 at 5:02 AM

    Your composition and selection of vocabulary is exemplary. And you have successfully expressed your passionate, energetic goals.

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  6. Muhammad Ahsan SaleemNovember 18, 2020 at 5:46 AM

    Great choice of words from such a talented individual. It is a very well structured poem with an amazing picture to end it.

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  7. Muhammad KhawarNovember 18, 2020 at 6:58 AM

    First of all composition used by you is too great mate.
    Nice rhythm!
    Nice creativity!
    It looks you are a big fan of English novels because man with this vocabulary at this age is quite amazing.
    Best poem in the class in my point of view and hope so in everyone's point of view.

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  8. Muhammad Talha KhalidNovember 18, 2020 at 9:19 AM

    The choice of your words truly seems astonishing and it highlights the hard work you put in your work!!

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  9. Dayan ShahidNovember 18, 2020 at 1:25 PM

    All the aspects are reflection of ur personality. Stunning choice of vocabulary and the phrase is relatable to you. Nice piece of writing I'll concllude at end. Keep it up!

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  10. Hamza ZaheerNovember 19, 2020 at 6:47 AM

    Huzaifa the selection of words and the flow is perfect,it reflects your motivation , hustle and resiliency.Keep on shinning and on track of becoming better.

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  11. Mirnaz AliNovember 19, 2020 at 10:26 AM

    Your effort behind this poem and behind your life can be clearly seen through the words of this beautifully written poem. You shall surely succeed! InshaAllaah

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  12. TIME IS INVESTMENT ALWAYS IN LOSSNovember 20, 2020 at 7:28 AM

    These words are a clear insight into the hard work and perseverance you have put in. Indeed well thought and well executed

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  13. Haider AliNovember 20, 2020 at 9:48 AM

    This poem exactly depicts yourself. You have a good vocabulary.

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